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Ah, yes. "Magic Thing." Very technical, Brent.

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MegSyv, February 3rd, 2014, 6:57 am ( Reply )

Penultimate Problems - When I started developing the general way I wanted to tell this story, I decided that I was not at any point going to stop and explain the technicalities of how things work or the rules by which everything is governed. That stuff is boring and I think it takes away a lot of the more creative solutions your readers could come up with.

So yes, it really is a little bit more complicated than just sewing a wound shut, but I'm not going to waste a lot of time explaining why. I think it's more fun for you that way.

As an aside, this is the second to last page of the chapter. Aw yeaaaahhhh

Meg out.

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uhhhh ( Reply )

how is he even able to lift his arm with a chunk of muscle chewed clear off? there was BONE showing!

posted by Wazaga on February 3rd, 2014, 7:45 am





 
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@Wazaga: By just lifting my arm, most of the effort and tension occurred in the Delta and shoulder, so I didn't think it would really need the muscles located under the bicep and near the elbow. I should have probably put a little more research into that, though...

posted by MegSyv on February 3rd, 2014, 8:59 am





 
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@MegSyv: I didn't mean it as a crit for research. but the idea seems extremely painful, that's all. can you imagine what little those muscle do trying to do their job with that much damage?

owwies!

posted by Wazaga on February 3rd, 2014, 10:00 am





 
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@MegSyv: I think it's the Deltoid, not Delta.

posted by Have a rock on February 3rd, 2014, 5:28 pm





 
Brent's toughness level = 10 ( Reply )

Brent must get his arm chomped on a lot, he's mostly complaining about the rock.

Here have a rock!

posted by Have a rock on February 3rd, 2014, 5:34 pm





 
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@Have a rock: Dagnabbit.

posted by MegSyv on February 3rd, 2014, 6:25 pm





 
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@Have a rock: All things considered, I find your screenname wildly appropriate in this situation. Although I might just be stating the obvious at this point.

posted by MegSyv on February 3rd, 2014, 6:26 pm





 
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@MegSyv: It started out as a joke between me and my best friend. We were roleplaying, and his character , who is just a little bit crazy but endearingly so, ran out of arrows in a fight. So he just started chucking rocks, yelling HAVE A ROCK! And so, my username was born.(Also, his character now has an obsession with rocks.) Slightly crazy friends are fun.

posted by Have a rock on February 3rd, 2014, 6:40 pm





 
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great page

posted by man in black on February 3rd, 2014, 7:52 pm





 
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@Have a rock: Being a slightly crazy friend myself, I approve greatly of yours!

posted by MegSyv on February 4th, 2014, 7:25 am





 
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@Wazaga: That's cuz Brent doesn't want to seem like a sissy in front of Thistle. *eyebrow waggles*

posted by MegSyv on February 4th, 2014, 7:26 am



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@Have a rock: I approve of this origin story.

posted by Riverfox237 (Guest) on February 6th, 2014, 2:19 pm





 
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Loving how you have costumed everyone. Great character introductions too!

posted by lisanaffziger on March 5th, 2015, 11:30 am



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